Duration: 1 week | Prerequisites: Foundation Module
Learning Objectives:
- Master the BRIEF method for clear, compelling business writing
- Write emails that get immediate responses and drive action
- Create proposals and reports that win approval
- Develop your unique executive voice and tone
Key Topics:
- The psychology of executive attention and decision-making
- BRIEF framework: Bottom-line, Reason, Information, End, Follow-up
- Email strategies that command respect and responses
- Proposal writing that influences and persuades
The Executive Writing Challenge
Executives receive 120+ emails per day and make hundreds of decisions. Your writing must cut through the noise, capture attention instantly, and make it easy for busy leaders to say "yes" to your requests.
The Executive Mindset:
- Time is their most valuable resource
- They think in terms of impact and outcomes
- They need to make quick, confident decisions
- They value clarity, brevity, and actionable insights
Common Writing Mistakes That Kill Careers:
- Burying the Lead: Important information hidden in paragraphs 3-4
- Lack of Clear Ask: Reader unsure what action you want them to take
- Too Much Detail: Overwhelming executives with unnecessary information
- Weak Subject Lines: Emails that get ignored or deleted
- No Business Case: Failing to connect requests to business value
The BRIEF Method: Your Writing Framework
B - Bottom Line Up Front
Start with your conclusion, recommendation, or request. Answer "What do you want?" in the first sentence.
Poor Example:
"I've been analyzing our Q3 performance data and noticed some interesting trends in customer acquisition costs. After reviewing the numbers with the marketing team and considering various factors..."
BRIEF Example:
"I recommend we reduce our Google Ads spend by 30% and reallocate $50K to LinkedIn advertising to improve our customer acquisition cost by 25%."
R - Reason Why
Provide the compelling business rationale. Connect to company priorities, revenue impact, or strategic goals.
Framework:
- "This will [specific business impact] because [clear reason]"
- "Based on [data/evidence], this change will [outcome]"
- "To achieve [company goal], we need to [your recommendation]"
I - Information (Key Facts Only)
Include only the essential data that supports your recommendation. Use bullets, numbers, and visual hierarchy.
Guidelines:
- Maximum 3-5 key facts
- Use specific numbers and percentages
- Include timeframes and deadlines
- Highlight the most important information
E - End with Clear Next Steps
Tell the reader exactly what you need from them and by when.
Effective Endings:
- "Please approve by Friday so we can implement next week"
- "I need your decision by Tuesday to meet the Q4 deadline"
- "Can we schedule 15 minutes this week to discuss implementation?"
F - Follow-up Plan
Indicate how and when you'll follow up, removing the mental burden from the recipient.
Examples:
- "I'll send a detailed implementation plan by Wednesday"
- "I'll follow up next Friday with preliminary results"
- "I'll check in weekly with progress updates"
Email Mastery: The Executive's Communication Tool
Subject Line Psychology:
Your subject line determines if your email gets opened, ignored, or deleted. Executives scan subject lines in 2-3 seconds.
High-Impact Subject Line Formulas:
- Action Required + Deadline: "Approval needed: Q4 budget by Friday"
- Specific Outcome + Timeframe: "Reduce costs 15% - proposal for your review"
- Question + Benefit: "Quick question: Save $30K on software licenses?"
- Update + Status: "Project Alpha: On track for Tuesday launch"
- Request + Context: "30 minutes needed: Strategic planning input"
Email Structure for Maximum Impact:
Subject: [Action Required] Q4 Marketing Budget - Approval by Friday
Hi [Name],
BOTTOM LINE: I need approval for our Q4 marketing budget reallocation to capture the holiday opportunity.
REASON: Early data shows 40% higher conversion rates for holiday campaigns. Reallocating $75K from underperforming channels could increase Q4 revenue by $300K.
KEY FACTS:
• Current holiday campaign ROI: 4:1 vs. 2.5:1 average
• Competitor analysis shows 60% increase in holiday ad spend
• Implementation deadline: Monday to capture peak season
NEXT STEPS: Please approve by Friday COB so we can launch Monday.
FOLLOW-UP: I'll send detailed performance metrics weekly starting next Friday.
Best regards,
[Your name]
Email Response Psychology:
Why Executives Don't Respond:
- Unclear what you want them to do
- Too much cognitive load to process
- No clear deadline or urgency
- Request seems low-priority or risky
How to Guarantee Responses:
- Make it easy to say yes (provide options)
- Create appropriate urgency (real deadlines)
- Reduce decision fatigue (clear recommendations)
- Show business impact (connect to their goals)
Proposal Writing That Wins
The Executive Proposal Structure:
1. Executive Summary (The Decision Page)
- Problem statement in one sentence
- Your solution in one sentence
- Business impact in specific numbers
- Investment required and timeline
- Clear recommendation
2. Business Case
- Current state analysis
- Cost of inaction
- Proposed solution benefits
- ROI calculation and timeline
- Risk mitigation
3. Implementation Plan
- Key milestones and deadlines
- Resource requirements
- Success metrics
- Contingency plans
4. Appendix (Supporting Details)
- Detailed analysis
- Market research
- Technical specifications
- Alternative options considered
Proposal Psychology Principles:
Anchoring: Present your preferred option alongside alternatives to make it look reasonable.
Example:
- Option A: Basic solution ($50K, 6 months, 15% improvement)
- Option B: Recommended solution ($100K, 4 months, 35% improvement) ← Your preference
- Option C: Premium solution ($200K, 3 months, 50% improvement)
Social Proof: Include examples of similar successful implementations.
Example:
"Similar companies (Company X, Company Y) saw 25-40% improvement within 3 months of implementation."
Loss Aversion: Emphasize what they'll lose by not acting.
Example:
"Delaying this initiative will cost us $500K in lost revenue and allow competitors to capture 15% more market share."
Developing Your Executive Voice
Voice Characteristics of Successful Executives:
Confident but Not Arrogant:
- "I recommend..." vs. "I think maybe we should..."
- "Based on the data..." vs. "I feel like..."
- "This will deliver..." vs. "This might help..."
Concise but Complete:
- Every word serves a purpose
- Complex ideas explained simply
- Technical details in appendix
Action-Oriented:
- Focus on outcomes and results
- Clear next steps and deadlines
- Ownership of follow-through
Business-Focused:
- Connect everything to business value
- Use metrics and specific numbers
- Think like an owner, not an employee
Advanced Writing Techniques
The Power of Specificity:
Weak: "This will improve our performance significantly"
Strong: "This will increase conversion rates from 2.3% to 3.1%, generating an additional $150K in monthly revenue"
Strategic Use of White Space:
- Break up dense paragraphs
- Use bullet points for key information
- Create visual hierarchy with headers
- Make it scannable in 30 seconds
The "So What?" Test:
After every statement, ask "So what?" If you can't answer with a clear business impact, remove or revise the statement.
Emotional Intelligence in Writing:
- Acknowledge the reader's perspective
- Address potential concerns proactively
- Use inclusive language ("we" vs. "you")
- Show appreciation for their time and consideration
Module 1 Action Items
This Week:
- Audit Your Recent Emails: Review your last 10 important emails using the BRIEF framework
- Rewrite One Email: Take a recent email that didn't get the response you wanted and rewrite it using BRIEF
- Practice Subject Lines: Write 5 different subject lines for the same email and test which gets better responses
- Create Your Proposal Template: Develop a standard template using the executive proposal structure
- Voice Analysis: Record yourself reading a business email and identify areas to sound more executive
Daily Practice:
- Apply BRIEF to every important email
- Write subject lines that pass the "2-second test"
- End every email with a clear next step
- Use specific numbers instead of vague language
Preparation for Module 2:
- Identify 3 upcoming presentations or meetings where you can practice verbal communication
- Note situations where you need to influence without authority
- Observe how senior leaders communicate in meetings
Module 1 Summary
Key Insights:
- Executive writing is about making it easy for busy leaders to make decisions
- The BRIEF method ensures your writing is clear, compelling, and actionable
- Subject lines determine if your message gets read—invest time in crafting them
- Proposals must lead with business impact and provide clear recommendations
- Your writing voice should be confident, concise, and business-focused
Next Module Preview:
Module 2 focuses on Verbal Communication & Presentation Mastery—how to command attention, influence decisions, and demonstrate leadership presence in meetings and presentations.
Ready to master verbal communication? Continue to Module 2: Verbal Communication & Presentation Mastery →
Module 2: Presentation Excellence
Duration: 2 weeks | Prerequisites: Module 1
Learning Objectives:
- Deliver presentations that position you as an expert
- Handle Q&A sessions with confidence and authority
- Use storytelling to make complex ideas memorable
- Command the room with executive presence
Core Skills:
- The STAR framework for compelling presentations
- Visual design that reinforces your message
- Handling difficult questions and pushback
- Virtual presentation mastery for remote leadership
Module 3: Strategic Communication
Duration: 2 weeks | Prerequisites: Module 2
Learning Objectives:
- Communicate up, down, and across the organization effectively
- Frame problems and solutions like a strategic leader
- Influence without authority through communication
- Build consensus and drive alignment
Core Skills:
- Stakeholder communication mapping
- The SCARF model for influential messaging
- Conflict resolution through strategic communication
- Building and maintaining professional relationships
Module 4: Personal Branding Through Communication
Duration: 2 weeks | Prerequisites: Module 3
Learning Objectives:
- Develop a consistent professional brand voice
- Position yourself as a thought leader in your field
- Leverage communication for network building
- Create content that showcases your expertise
Core Skills:
- Brand voice development and consistency
- LinkedIn and professional social media strategy
- Internal thought leadership and visibility
- Mentoring and knowledge sharing for brand building
Mastery Project: The Promotion Portfolio
Duration: 1 week | Prerequisites: All Modules
Project Overview:
Create a comprehensive communication portfolio that demonstrates your readiness for advancement, including:
- A strategic proposal for a high-impact initiative
- A presentation to senior leadership
- A thought leadership article or internal case study
- A 90-day communication plan for your target role